Thesis Statement : Eating at home is a better option than eating outside
Reason 1 : Eating at home is much more cheaper than eating outside
Example 1 :For example the money which we pay for the materials for cooking never be enough if we want to eat in a restaurant.
Reason 2 :It is more reliable. Because we can't rely on the people who sell food we buy.
Example 2 :For instance the material the seller use is mostly worse than ours.
Reason 3 :While eating at home we can create a more warm atmosphere. We can have a chat with family members confortablely.
Reasons againts (opponent's argumet):Opponents of this is claim think that eating outside is much better. Because if we don't have time it is a good option. Also people sometimes want to eat outside for entertainment. They want to be in a different places. This appeals to them. Or maybe people who work really hard can feel tired and they can't stand working at home, too so they prefer eating outside.
Refutation of opponents argument :They have a point in thinking like that. However they only think the part of working. It is expensive and not comfortable. They don't pay attention to these points.
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It is a well-developed paragraph. But could you please state your thesis statement in a different way? You can write the reasons just in phrases. After that, you can write your paragraph.
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