Thesis Statement : Nowadays many people download music from the Internet and it is a matter of debate if it is legal or illegal. In my opinion, it must be illegal. Because it isnt't something different from stealing.
Supporting Ideas
Reason 1 :We don't pay any money while we are downloading music. So it something just like stealing.
Reason 2 :We don't respect the composer or singer's effort without giving anything to them
Opposing Ideas
Reason 1 :Many people think that it isn't a crime. Because buying the albums isn't affordable.
Reason 2 :Most of the people find it easy and really quick and they don't want to waste time.
Refutation of Opponent's Ideas : Even though it is easy and quick, these can't be a reason for stealing other's effort. If we were artists or composers, we would understand how a bad thing it was. So we should pay money for the music we listen.
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